advice on my deck

[stevil]

ok hears my deck
synchros
2.Chaos King Archfiend
2.Hundred-Eyes Dragon

monsters 5 and up
Beast of Talwar
Dark Ruler Ha Des
Raviel, Lord of Phantasms
Summoned Skull

monsters 4 and lower 20
3.Dark Resonator
3.Newdoria
3.Goblin King
3.Wall of Illusion
Dark Hunter
Dark Mimic LV1
Dark Mimic LV3
Giant Orc
Night Assailant
Sangan
Shadowslayer
Sinister Sprocket

spells 9
2.Axe of Despair
2.Inferno Reckless Summon
Dark Hole
Lightning Vortex
Monster Reborn
Mystic Plasma Zone
Mystical Space Typhoon

traps 7
2.The Grave of Enkindling
Call of the Haunted
Hate Buster
Magic Cylinder
Mirror Force
Torrential Tribute

id like 2 keep it dark and fiend
and allso i already have hundred-eyes dragon in my ex deck so i was thinking of adding a red dragon archfiend. r.d.a. dnot need fiends 4 tribute like 100-eyes but it duds have fiend in its name.
what do u think?
.....card-fiend.....stevil

[monarchcaius]

it deems incinsistant, and kinda blah. i used to use fiends alot so i'll help you as much as i can.

monsters

1 dark king ha des
2 caius
2 raviel, l.o.f.
2 dark necrofear?
2 mystic tomato
1 sangan
2 dark resonator
1 sinister sproket
2 goblin king
1 dark hunter
2 newdoria
2 wall of illusion

spells

1 allure of darkness
1 lightning vortek
2 smashing ground
1 dark hole
1 monster reborn
1 MST
1 foolish burial
1 card destruction

traps

2 trap stun
1 CoTH
2 grave of endking
1 TT
1 mirror force
1 Hate Buster
1 Magic Cylinder

[stevil]

thanks 4 the advice monarchcaius
im considering a caius but dnot have 1 yet
but caius effect is not compatible whit 100-eyes Dragon
im trying 2 get a inferno hammer witch is compatible

ive only made 1 chang 2 my deck sens i 1st posted
a new grave squirmer 4 my old dark mimic lv3

with grave squirmer and my 3 goblin kings that 4 monsters with 0 ATK
and im also considering putting in a ogre of the Scarlet sorrow

is thar a way 2 make 0 ATK monsters assets instead of drawback?

[monarchcaius]

yes, by using cards like mystic tomato to search them out.

[chica_duelista]

3 Doomcaliber Knights, Tragoedia and Dark Armed Dragon.

[skittlz100]

Quote:

3 Doomcaliber Knights, Tragoedia and Dark Armed Dragon.

It doesn't get more cliche than that.

[ehero09]

skittlz100 wrote:

Quote: 3 Doomcaliber Knights, Tragoedia and Dark Armed Dragon. It doesn't get more cliche than that.

Lol no kidding

Why not add a few more synchros? Every deck could use a stardust, and I'd you do use rda then try splashing red nove dragon too

[li23yut]

try adding a little more chill...bring it on with...red nova dragon...burning high in my pride and ...red majestic dragon. anyway,just do what you think is best.that is the best thing to do.if you want to follow my advice and others,do it, but,just listen to yourself.

[li23yut]

new idea.add 3 second boosters and 3 fortress guards.how about a powerful pickaxe and a synchro boost?a kycoo never hurts...

[soulbuster95]

yes i agree with li23yut a kycoo never hearts

[swordbaron4]

You dont really need summon skull..you can replace it with caius..caius is a fiend and he's a dark type..and if you put red dragon might as well put nova and um trident idk bout him i mean if you summon him its like otk if you destroy 2 cards..and a kycoo never hearts other than that great job

[stardustdragon1]

1) take out beast of talwar. its level 7, and kinda weak for one. use caius instead.

2)put in dark armed dragon (if you have one)

3) put in dark necrofear, and/or the wicked eraser. (if you have them.)
if your going to put in a syncro dragon, make it stardust dragon. its not dark, but its a big help in just about any deck.

other than that, i didnt see any major problems. overall a pretty good deck too.