shuriken6
LV16
Member since July 1, 2010
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| Subject: No effort? Posted: August 29, 2011 12:24 pm |
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It just seems like you rushed through it. I know its your first official review, but all in all its rushed. I know you can do so much better than this; the info's just too obvious. The whole point of doing card reviews is to get people to think: "Oh Wow i didn't realize that i could use this card like this" or "That's something i never thought about, using this card against 'So and So'." The fact that it can destroy 2 shields, has 7000 power and its cost can be reduced by Cocco Lupia is all obvious to say the least. But i will give you credit: At least you learned from your actions. Just next time, study up on the card; Turn it into a research Project, make a unique deck and just mess around, find out different ways to use said card. (Like for example: Experiment Decks )
And don't see this as me flaming you. It's constructive criticism. I've been writing fanfiction since i was 14 so i know how to write certain things, i know how to do my research on things and all of that. It'll take a bit of practice, but if u need any help with any reviews, you have 90-something friends in that DM group of ours who for the most part should try our best to help
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waileukwu
LV20
Member since January 14, 2010
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| Subject: Posted: August 29, 2011 06:07 pm |
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Hm...you almost said nothing in the review, what is this for? Reviews are either to let others know what this card can do or tell others what other possible combinations are out there. You kinda didn't do any of that.
And are you kidding me? Bolmeteus is one of the creatures with almost like 2 promo variations, and 3 reprint alternate arts. And use Bolmeteus to destroy other's creatures? 7000 power? It is made to destroy shields pal.
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kazeblack
LV14
Member since April 5, 2010
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| Subject: Posted: October 1, 2011 08:04 am |
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to add something more to my comment on my low vote, you should really add pics and edit this review.in some cases your text is misleading and hard to understand, for example:
| quote: | Weakness/Cons:
The power. It's not to easy to destroy. |
i would say thats a strengh and no weakness. ;-)
you also should mark the headlines bold and make clear paragraphs.it really looks like you go through it without giving that card any love.
by the way don't use colloquial language in such a formal text.taht doesnt fit really.....
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