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Death Phoenix, Avatar of Doom

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(This creature is put into your mana zone tapped.) Vortex Evolution - Put on one of your Zombie Dragons and one of your Fire Birds. Double breaker (This creature breaks 2 shields). Whenever this creature would break a shield, your opponent puts that shield into his graveyard instead. When this creature leaves the Battle Zone, you opponent discards his hand.

  • Collector Number: S4
  • Rarity: Super Rare
  • Type: Evolution Creature
  • Race: Phoenix
  • Power: 9000
  • Cost: 4
  • Civilization: Darkness/Fire
Death Phoenix, Avatar of Doom
Black Flames of Death and the Shadow of Destruction... Avatar Reviews Part 5

written by shuriken6 Premium Member LV20
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recommend that you read:

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If you've read them, Move on...


Revival of Doom
What's up people? It's shuriken6 with Part 5 of the Avatar Reviews! *Sigh* well I had started this but my Laptop just had to have a breakdown... So now i gotta start over. I don't wanna but i don't got a choice, this needs to get done. Without further ado, Here's Drake and Sarina introducing the 5th and Final Avatar...


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Outside, the Avatars all diverted their attention to the building Adrian turning to them.

"Let's go!" he commanded the group as they all flew upward.

As they got close, they smashed into the Gold barrier, not able to break it.

"What the…?" Dylan asked as Zweilancer tried to chip at the barrier to no avail.

"The barrier… its Grand Cross catastrophe…" Adrian confirmed. "We can't get in… and they can't get out."

"So that means we're forced to watch Sarina die in there?" Wyatt asked as he looked on.

Sarina and Soul Phoenix struggled as they looked on Drake's side, barely a scratch on him and all five shields intact, while Sarina had none.

"With the Black Flames of Death, and the Shadow of Destruction, Allow these two to become one… Galzark, Chitta: Vortex Evolve into Death Phoenix, Avatar of Doom!"

The two Creatures united and evolved into Death Phoenix. The evil Avatar roared as Sarina finally got onto her feet. She looked outside and saw her friends out there, all of them seeing how badly injured she was. But all she did was smile.

"Death Phoenix…" Drake raised his fingers into the air as Sarina looked on.

"It's a shame… It looks like death doesn't want you." Sarina told her brother.

Drake shook his head. "He doesn't want me… He is me… Todomeda…!"

Death Phoenix charged its black flames and shot them towards Sarina. Something told her to turn around. She did and saw something that made her feel at ease…

"C.J…" She whispered to herself.

Sarina's Body flew into the air and crashed hard against the roof floor as she bled from her landing. C.J. raced over in Mach speed to get to her.

"Sarina…!" He shook her to try and wake her up.

She cracked her eyes open and smiled. "You're alive…"

"Yeah of course I am you dummy!" C.J. yelled at her. "We agreed that I was going to duel Drake not you!"

Sarina smirked and turned her head. "Seems that I've been making a lot of stupid mistakes lately huh…? At least I don't have any more regrets…"

"Please, don't die too…" C.J. Pleaded. "I already lost Tsume; I'm not losing you too!"

"Don't worry about me…" Sarina smiled. "I'll always be with you…"

She, with the last of her strength, reached into her pocket and handed him her Soul Phoenix card.

"I'll always be there, to protect My Hero…" she closed her eyes as her arm slowly dropped to the ground, her dead hand letting go of Soul Phoenix.

"SARINNNNAAAA!" C.J. cried out loudly as everyone was shocked at the unfathomable moment that they just witnessed.

Drake crossed his arms and smirked. "And then there were four…"

"DRAKE!" C.J. turned, his hands sparking up both colors violently. "I'm going to end you HERE AND NOW!" C.J. grabbed his deck and slid Soul Phoenix into it, the deck sparking red and green lightning.

"Kettou Da!" He snarled.

"Yoshi…" Drake accepted. "It'll be nice to kill you as well."

Jamie ran over and took Sarina's body from C.J.'s feet as he stood at the damaged K-Terminal.

The 10 shields materialized as they drew their hands.

"DUEL… START!" They both called out.


Death Phoenix, Avatar of Doom is the 5th and Final Avatar of the quints, reigning over the Fire and Darkness Civilizations. In both Vortex Wars and in the DM Anime series, Death Phoenix has played the Antagonist Role, the first Duel Masters movie: Curse of the Death Phoenix, along with being used in some of the DMC Decks used by the Antagonist such as Zakira. In Vortex Wars, Death Phoenix, like the other Avatars took on a Human persona, his being Daisuke "Drake" Saito, Sarina's brother. Drake served as the leader of Team Zero and the Main Antagonist of Vortex Wars, his plans dealing with a 6500 year revenge plot against the Avatars, who left him for dead once he defected from the group, angered by the decision by the civilizations to make Aura Pegasus the Leader of the Avatars rather than him, who was a Soul Phoenix at the time. The Death Phoenix body that Drake was, was a zombie-fied Soul Phoenix, that the Darkness civilization decided to experiment on.


Destructive Blaze


(Didn't have a booster pack for it... So Cool-looking Japanese reprint it is )

Death Phoenix, Avatar of Doom is the Vortex Evolution of Fire Birds, and Zombie Dragons. What makes Death Phoenix so unique is that it shares many similarities to it's Soul Phoenix Counterpart. For Example:

  • Both are of the Phoenix Race (Obviously)
  • Both Vortex Evolutions cost 4
  • Both are results of Vortex Evolutions of Fire Birds and Dragons


But they also have their differences such as:
  • Soul Phoenix Has 13000 base power while Death Phoenix has 9000
  • Soul Phoenix has Triple Breaker, while Death Phoenix has Double Breaker
  • Death Phoenix has the ability to Destroy Shields!!!


Now this is the part where you go: He Destroys shields!? Haha, but you guys definitely did that when you opened that booster pack and got him. Yes, the Big Bad Black Bird can incinerate Shields just like a certain Dragon, which will remain nameless...



Like I said Nameless, if you can't read Japanese then thats your fault. Moving on we have the Removing abilities of said Birdie. Drum Roll...

*Drum Roll*

Hand Incinerating: In other words, Once Death Phoenix leaves, your opponent discards his hand. Helpful for those Water decks that rely on hand building, or even better if Death Phoenix is involved with a deck featuring Creature Bouncing and/or Creatures with the "No Choice" Ability. Keep in mind though that currently there are cards that counteract Discards such as:



Sanfist, the Savage Vizier



Terradragon Arque delacerna

And the Biggest and I mean BIGGEST pain in the butt... (Keep in mind that my review for him was before i discovered how annoying he is)



Eternal Meteor Kaiser...

I swear every time I see that card hit the battle zone I imagine my opponent going:



But we'll focus more on that in the counter section, for now let's just keep moving...

Cross #5: Doom
I actually have 2 decks for this section. The first one is one I made KG: Doom Cross Which was Drake's deck used throughout Vortex Wars. The second deck is by one of my closest TCO Buddies Kokujo_the_fma with Drake's deck used in the final battle: Drake's Deck which was a slightly updated version of Drake's deck. Both were Zombie Dragon decks w/ Fire Bird Support such as Cocco Lupia and Chitta Peloru, the Zombie Dragons including Giland, Galzark, Divine Destruction Dragonmech and Abzo Dolba to name a few.

Phoenix's Army of Destruction
with each set block comes new and crazy awesome creatures to add on to the Races. And compared to the older generation of Zombie Dragons in the English Sets... I think they did a good job with updating them.


I may be a Knight, but I know my way around a Desert Eagle-
(Romanoff the 1st)


Romanoff the First is the perfect example of new Zombie Dragon additions. Despite being 7 mana, he has the ability to cast darkness spells with a cost of 6 or less from the grave, making it so that Terror Pit Shield trigger can go back for round two; and with 8000 base power, he can hold his own without too much of a threat.



Samurai and Aliens... they're all the same to me. Just tell me what to shoot and it's dead. (Dark GUY Romanoff Zero)

In a nutshell, Romanoff Zero is nothing more than a Hunter version of Romanoff the first, same effect and all. But he's great for a Death Phoenix deck based on Hunters, if that's your Forte...


Dragons never truly die... We just come back, Fiercer, Stronger and Deadlier than before... (Necrodragon Guljeneraid)

Necrodragon Guljeneraid is the definiton of Zombie Dragon. Whenever one of your dragons are destroyed, he can be summoned Via. Graveyard for no cost. Perfect combination is using him with The Two Romanoffs mentioned above, as they can Search your deck and send him into the Graveyard; and just in case a Dragon Dies, it rise from the dead as Guljeneraid.


Once you get past the rotting flesh and the Piercing Yellow eyes, it's Kinda cute - (Kachua, Keeper of the Ice Gate)

Necrodragon Giland, is still an oldie, but due to my thought of trying Not to make this a copy of my Soul Phoenix Review, i disregarded it, which was pretty stupid of me... Anyway, Necrodragon Giland is a 4 mana 6000 2X Breaker, who dies if it battles. Perfect Death Phoenix bait just because of it's low cost, and with Cocco Lupia, it can be dropped to 2 mana for it, allowing you to spam it if you desire to do so, or at least summon a second one in case the first bait dies.


I make Hell look like Heaven!- (Galzark, Divine Destruction Dragonmech)

I can't leave him out. He played a Major Role in the DM movie and if we're doing comparisons between the two Phoenixes, he's definitely the opposite of Super Dragon Machine Dolzark. (Funfact: In Duel Masters Vortex Wars, it's name is Super Dragon Machine Galzark, mirroring it's Earth Dragon counterpart)

Galzark is an interesting dragon in itself, able to gain +6000 and Triple Breaker, just for having an additional Dragon out. And he can't be attacked... That's pretty cool, just that fact alone should put fear in your opponent, making so he's can't be rid of easily.


(Let's make some noise)- Cocco Lupia

Can't be a Phoenix deck without the Fire Birds right? Cocco Reduces the Zombie Dragon's cost by 2 like usual. And Speaking of the Lupia Family...



No one's killed one of MY Dragons and lived to tell about it... I dare you to be the first...- (Dark Lupia)

Cocco Lupia's Goth Bro decided to help her out. Whenever one of your dragons are destroyed, Dark Lupia Avenges them, allowing to kill one of your opponent's creatures in return. And Eye for an Eye, Wing for a Wing, Karma's a real *Insert Word/ Trollface*


Let's go, Lunarzeberg!- (Lunar Kuroro)

Lunar Kuroro is a Fire Bird that gives all creatures in the battle zone Slayer. In addition to that whenever a dragon attacks you can pick a creature from your graveyard. So not only does it serve as bait, but also a way to recover your lost creatures.


Even if I fall, my commrades will avenge me!- (Super Necrodragon Lunarzberg)
Super Necrodragon Lunarzberg is a Nice addition to the deck, as when it dies, It can summon up to two 7 costing Darkness Creatures in her place; In this situation, two Zombie Dragons and/or Darkness Fire Birds to use for Death Phoenix. And since it's a Zombie Dragon, it serves as bait too.

And remember the "No Choice" Thing I mentioned earlier? No Choice is a mechanic that allows Said Creature to gain an ability whenever either player has no cards in their hand. If Death Phoenix leaves, then your opponent's hand will empty itself. Allowing creatures such as:


I'll make sure you all rot in the underworld!!- (Black Ganveet, Legion of Demise)

Black Ganveet, To activate their abilities. His No Choice Ability is that he gains an additional +5000 power, totaling 12000. And then you have other ones like this one:


I'm gonna make this hurt as much as possible...- (Skull Merdi, Shadow of Vice)
Skull Merdi gains +4000 and Double Breaker through it's no choice ability. It looks like Death Phoenix has been recruiting over the years...





The Ultimate Treasure left by the Great Bajula... Now it's mine... -(Death Phoenix)

Spur of the moment idea. Why have a Double Breaking shield destroying Phoenix, when you can have a Triple Breaking Shield Destroying Phoenix that can also incinerate mana...? Bajula's soul can turn your Phoenix from Hell into a Triple Breaking Heart breaker that burns mana with it's attack, totaling 5 cards to the grave if successful.

Saving the World...? Not Easy!!
Besides the Generic, common sense removal stuff, Creatures that are triggered Via "Discarding" like the three mentioned above are your best options. Death Phoenix's shield breaking destroys shields so Triggers are useless, and when it leaves you discard. So Creatures that go somewhere other than the grave when discarded, are a Perfect way to overcome the Phoenix. There is however other way. Just because the cards are in your grave doesn't mean that they're gone for good...(Thanks Waileukwu, Juncombo0 and Kaze Black)



Make Way for the Puppet Master- (Death March, Reaper of Death)

Death March is a Grave Evolution Creature, which means that it can evolve from any darkness creature in your Graveyard. Just because he only has 1000 power doesn't mean that he doesn't have an Ace up his sleeves. Whenever this creature Battles, the battling creature loses -4000 power until the end of that battle. So if it blocks Death Phoenix, his power will drop to 5000. Not spectacular, but the ability to reuse cards in the grave for last minute blockers with effects like this do indeed payoff.



Gah! those surface dwellers don't understand the meaning of recycling. Of course I have to clean up that Phoenix's mess... (Cyber N World)

Darkness isn't the only situation that can make use of the Grave. Cyber N World is a creature that shuffles your hand AND you graveyard back into your deck, making you draw 5 new cards. So the cards you lost due to the phoenix, come right back to you. Oh the joys of recycling!

And Darkness has another ability that can counteract the Death Phoenix's Discarding.



The Reign of the Avatars is Over! It's now time for the Zeta Clan to take over... Hannibal Zeta, the Charismatic Annihilator

The Zeta Forces emerged in the DM-36 Set and they brought along "Soul Recall"an ability that triggers when you put a certain number of cards from the grave to the bottom of your deck. Hannibal for example, has a variant called "Hell's Soul Recall" which lets him use the ability for ever 4 cards sent to the deck from the grave, and for every 4, you can destroy a creature your opponent controls. Remember Kids, Recycling saves the world from evil Phoenixes

The World in his Talons
4 mana Vortex Evolution with Shield Destroying and Discarding. Can't get much better than that to be honest.

The Fall of the Phoenix... Again

Looking back at the previous reviews, Death Phoenix ranks 3 at the Stats list, due to it being a Double Breaker and only having 9000 power. If it had Soul Phoenix's power and Breaking Variant he'd be at #1... or at least restricted, that's a little too powerful. nonetheless, Cards currently have the ability to take down 9000 powered creatures, not easily but its definitely do-able. And don't forget about the Discarding creatures, i only mentioned Three of them, but there's a whole lot more itching to be kicked out of their owner's hand.

Good vs Evil



One of my favorite Artworks of Death Phoenix, depicting it fighting against Soul Phoenix... Wait scratch that, that's not Soul Phoenix, That's Eternal Phoenix, Phoenix, Phoenix of the Dragon Flame... Well since he's here, I guess i should do a review on him too. After All, I consider him the Avatar of Eternity

Conclusion to Part 5
And so Ends the 5th Review, thank God. As for Death Phoenix, it Gets a 9/10. Solid abilities, Shield Destoyer, and a discard effect. However, Since Eternal's sprouting up in new decks, i wouldn't be so hasty to use that last effect personally.

And well, despite not being an Avatar, Blaze Phoenix, Avatar of Eternity(Eternal Phoenix) is getting a review, being regarded as the Sixth and Final Avatar, so look out for that one. K guys, thanks for Reading; Comment, rate etc and have a good Day, night whatever

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Modified on August 27, 2013 06:14 am



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sekai
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Subject:    Posted: January 30, 2012 08:21 am Reply with quote Report content icon

Ever since Zakira used this creature, its power always stayed with the older generation of players in Nippon. Good review, contained the last bit of the story that you seem to be writing?

Can counter Heaven's Gate decks well, due to discard on removal and removal of Shields (chose either to block or not block depending on hand).
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Subject:    Posted: January 30, 2012 09:48 am Reply with quote Report content icon

you didn't say anything in this review about the many uses of this card:
1.like marshall touch for example or a combo with water deck return your own creature to hand with evo bait creatures that have ability:when put to batlezone......
2.the part starting from your fanfic is boring and few will be reading it
3.you could say more about zombie dragons and fire birds
4.A lot of pictures is the worst idea: it makes the review a lot longer....and some people wont even read ot....and if you put pictures PUT THE NAME OF THE CARD NEAR THE PICTURE because some of us wont have any idea what that card does or what it is
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Subject: @vladutz   Posted: January 30, 2012 11:45 am Reply with quote Report content icon


quote from vladutz:

you didn't say anything in this review about the many uses of this card:
1.like marshall touch for example or a combo with water deck return your own creature to hand with evo bait creatures that have ability:when put to batlezone......
2.the part starting from your fanfic is boring and few will be reading it
3.you could say more about zombie dragons and fire birds
4.A lot of pictures is the worst idea: it makes the review a lot longer....and some people wont even read ot....and if you put pictures PUT THE NAME OF THE CARD NEAR THE PICTURE because some of us wont have any idea what that card does or what it is


OK... How about this. You try writing a review and get Card of the week 4 TIMES!! So I made a few mistakes big deal; I fixed them; I added more detail for the Zombie Dragons and the Fire Birds, You try coming up with Information for a review without more or less Copying a Review you've already Done, at 12:30AM no less. This Review was more or less gonna become just like my Soul Phoenix Review, which was the reason of the lack of information, it was a mistake and it's fixed. But please for the love of God don't tell me things that I already know. My methods work for me, my "Boring fanfic" is there so people would get a Background idea on what i'm basing the review on. These 5 Reviews, are all based on my fic that I've busted my butt on, without that I wouldn't be doing these reviews.

I don't have a lot of pictures and if I do, I explain them as much as I can. Seeing that I'm reading #4 clearly shows that you read none of my other reviews because I DO EXACTLY THAT! and if I don't have the name Directly under it, I highlight the card name the same color as the card with it's description. If people can't understand something so basic then something wrong with them.

I take Constructive Criticism Very Well. Ignorance and Stupidity is something COMPLETELY different, so for future reference please don't treat me like some talent-less Reviewer who doesn't know what he's doing. I've put a lot of work into this and if you don't like it than that's on you.
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Subject:    Posted: January 30, 2012 11:49 am Reply with quote Report content icon


quote from vladutz:

You didn't say anything in this review about the many uses of this card:
1. Like marshall touch for example or a combo with water deck return your own creature to hand with evo bait creatures that have ability:when put to battlezone......
2.The part starting from your fanfic is boring and few will read it.
3.You could say more about zombie dragons and fire birds.
4.A lot of pictures is the worst idea: it makes the review longer....and some people wont even read it....if you put pictures PUT THE NAME OF THE CARD NEAR THE PICTURE because some of us wont have any idea what that card does or what it is,unless they already searched for it.


You are one of the reasons why I'm ashamed I'm romanian.Shuriken done a lot of reviews,while you did zero,he deserves some respect,especially for someone who got Review of the week at least 3-4 times.

PS:Fixed what you said.
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vladutz
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Subject:    Posted: January 31, 2012 10:31 am Reply with quote Report content icon

nolan it was constructive criticism, because before editing your review was almost useless .You made it just to be done .It was a lot like anas reviews.Now is much better.Is was my mistake that i didn't read under the pictures the creatures name.You could steal add some more combo using this creature leaving the batlezone efect.And there are some cards wich works for all phoenix like universe gate that you could ve spoked of
tudoran anyone has the right to say what he thinks....Even a guy who is for the first time to opera can say that he didnt liked something to a mozart song.
Just because i dont have a lot of time to waste with this game doesnt mean i dont know what im speaking...and being ashamed that you are roumanian...you must have a horible life. im sorry for you.
Btw i won a tournament so I'm not a completely zero
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Subject:    Posted: January 31, 2012 11:05 am Reply with quote Report content icon


quote from vladutz:

nolan it was constructive criticism, because before editing your review was almost useless .You made it just to be done .It was a lot like anas reviews.Now is much better.Is was my mistake that i didn't read under the pictures the creatures name.You could steal add some more combo using this creature leaving the batlezone efect.And there are some cards wich works for all phoenix like universe gate that you could ve spoked of
tudoran anyone has the right to say what he thinks....Even a guy who is for the first time to opera can say that he didnt liked something to a Mozart song.
Just because i dont have a lot of time to waste with this game doesnt mean i dont know what im speaking...and being ashamed that you are roumanian...you must have a horible life. im sorry for you.
Btw i won a tournament so I'm not a completely zero


Yes,anyone has the right to say what he thinks on the internet.
As for my life,don't worry I already have friends that I can talk and play with,so my life is completely nice.I don't have time to waste with this game either,because I'm at university and most of the time I write reviews,so I barely have time to play.

PS:Winning a tournament has absolutely NOTHING to do with reviews.Do at least 10 reviews (not nooby ones,reviews with details,images,like mine) and then you can say that you aren't "completely zero".Until then,shut up.
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Subject:    Posted: January 31, 2012 11:25 am Reply with quote Report content icon

you realy think your review are goods?)) you are just doing reviews about dragons and you are telling just usual stuff for dragons.
And for nolan : with the part with boring fanfic here is what i meant: as a reader when you start reading a card review you re anxious too see some insane combo, and that part from fanfic makes the introduction too long, and the reader starts losing his interest in the review .I think adding a part from a fanfic is a good idea if isnt too long at beginning...or a long one as an end for review
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Subject:    Posted: January 31, 2012 11:29 am Reply with quote Report content icon

tudoran just to show you my writing skills this weekend i will make a review about zero phoenix; and then if you wont like it you can say im a completley zero
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Subject:    Posted: January 31, 2012 11:35 am Reply with quote Report content icon


quote from vladutz:


You could steal add some more combo using this creature leaving the battle zone effect.And there are some cards wich works for all phoenix like universe gate that you could've spoked of


This right here is Constructive criticsm; what you said before was just plain rude; (Boring fic really got to me) Especially since i worked so hard on that. Like I said though i was tired and i didn't wanna repeat myself, it wasn't because i wanted to get this out of the way. None of my reviews i intend to be like that. And I apologize for flipping out. I really take my card reviews and my fanfictions seriously, reason being is because I REALLY want to become a writer, it's one of my top 3 career choices and i plan on going to school in September this year to study Creative Writing. So when i hear people talk trash about stuff i put a whole lot of effort into i get really offended (Blame my lack of self esteem >.>) But what can I say? I'm human, it was just a once in a blue moon thing, it happens. ^_^

P.S.: two things:
  1. The Both of you need to stop fighting on my Review, take it somewhere else >.>
  2. Read my fanfiction. If it's that boring that people are going to skip over it, then try reading for yourself to see if i can prove other-wise. It won't kill you.
  3. Last thing: Mind changing the votes since its much better than before? I'd appreciate it

(Just read the new comment, still it won't kill you )
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vladutz
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Subject:    Posted: January 31, 2012 11:48 pm Reply with quote Report content icon

first :your fanfic is interesting(my mistake i didnt read it)
about constructive criticism here are some things you can add to your review to make him better:
Dobolzark, Dark Divine Dragon perfect evo bait and you are sure you have your phoenix in hand;
black ganvet(the psychic creature):it s easy for him to awaken after you suicide your phoenix;
ways to counter it:cards with freezing ability;
and for cyber n world part, you should mention a 1-2 cards that put cyber on top of your deck before destroyng death phoenix
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