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**Subject:** **Posted:** January 30, 2012 08:21 am

Ever since Zakira used this creature, its power always stayed with the older generation of players in Nippon. Good review, contained the last bit of the story that you seem to be writing?

Can counter Heaven's Gate decks well, due to discard on removal and removal of Shields (chose either to block or not block depending on hand).

**Subject:** **Posted:** January 30, 2012 09:48 am

you didn't say anything in this review about the many uses of this card:
1.like marshall touch for example or a combo with water deck return your own creature to hand with evo bait creatures that have ability:when put to batlezone......
2.the part starting from your fanfic is boring and few will be reading it
3.you could say more about zombie dragons and fire birds
4.A lot of pictures is the worst idea: it makes the review a lot longer....and some people wont even read ot....and if you put pictures PUT THE NAME OF THE CARD NEAR THE PICTURE because some of us wont have any idea what that card does or what it is

shuriken6 · **Subject:** @vladutz **Posted:** January 30, 2012 11:45 am

quote from vladutz:

you didn't say anything in this review about the many uses of this card:
1.like marshall touch for example or a combo with water deck return your own creature to hand with evo bait creatures that have ability:when put to batlezone......
2.the part starting from your fanfic is boring and few will be reading it
3.you could say more about zombie dragons and fire birds
4.A lot of pictures is the worst idea: it makes the review a lot longer....and some people wont even read ot....and if you put pictures PUT THE NAME OF THE CARD NEAR THE PICTURE because some of us wont have any idea what that card does or what it is

OK... How about this. You try writing a review and get Card of the week 4 TIMES!! So I made a few mistakes big deal; I fixed them; I added more detail for the Zombie Dragons and the Fire Birds, You try coming up with Information for a review without more or less Copying a Review you've already Done, at 12:30AM no less. This Review was more or less gonna become just like my Soul Phoenix Review, which was the reason of the lack of information, it was a mistake and it's fixed. But please for the love of God don't tell me things that I already know. My methods work for me, my "Boring fanfic" is there so people would get a Background idea on what i'm basing the review on. These 5 Reviews, are all based on my fic that I've busted my butt on, without that I wouldn't be doing these reviews.

I don't have a lot of pictures and if I do, I explain them as much as I can. Seeing that I'm reading #4 clearly shows that you read none of my other reviews because I DO EXACTLY THAT! and if I don't have the name Directly under it, I highlight the card name the same color as the card with it's description. If people can't understand something so basic then something wrong with them.

I take Constructive Criticism Very Well. Ignorance and Stupidity is something COMPLETELY different, so for future reference please don't treat me like some talent-less Reviewer who doesn't know what he's doing. I've put a lot of work into this and if you don't like it than that's on you.

tudordan · **Subject:** **Posted:** January 30, 2012 11:49 am

quote from vladutz:

You didn't say anything in this review about the many uses of this card:
1. Like marshall touch for example or a combo with water deck return your own creature to hand with evo bait creatures that have ability:when put to battlezone......
2.The part starting from your fanfic is boring and few will read it.
3.You could say more about zombie dragons and fire birds.
4.A lot of pictures is the worst idea: it makes the review longer....and some people wont even read it....if you put pictures PUT THE NAME OF THE CARD NEAR THE PICTURE because some of us wont have any idea what that card does or what it is,unless they already searched for it.

You are one of the reasons why I'm ashamed I'm romanian.Shuriken done a lot of reviews,while you did zero,he deserves some respect,especially for someone who got Review of the week at least 3-4 times.

PS:Fixed what you said.

**Subject:** **Posted:** January 31, 2012 10:31 am

nolan it was constructive criticism, because before editing your review was almost useless .You made it just to be done .It was a lot like anas reviews.Now is much better.Is was my mistake that i didn't read under the pictures the creatures name.You could steal add some more combo using this creature leaving the batlezone efect.And there are some cards wich works for all phoenix like universe gate that you could ve spoked of
tudoran anyone has the right to say what he thinks....Even a guy who is for the first time to opera can say that he didnt liked something to a mozart song.
Just because i dont have a lot of time to waste with this game doesnt mean i dont know what im speaking...and being ashamed that you are roumanian...you must have a horible life. im sorry for you.
Btw i won a tournament so I'm not a completely zero

tudordan · **Subject:** **Posted:** January 31, 2012 11:05 am

quote from vladutz:

nolan it was constructive criticism, because before editing your review was almost useless .You made it just to be done .It was a lot like anas reviews.Now is much better.Is was my mistake that i didn't read under the pictures the creatures name.You could steal add some more combo using this creature leaving the batlezone efect.And there are some cards wich works for all phoenix like universe gate that you could ve spoked of
tudoran anyone has the right to say what he thinks....Even a guy who is for the first time to opera can say that he didnt liked something to a Mozart song.
Just because i dont have a lot of time to waste with this game doesnt mean i dont know what im speaking...and being ashamed that you are roumanian...you must have a horible life. im sorry for you.
Btw i won a tournament so I'm not a completely zero

Yes,anyone has the right to say what he thinks on the internet.
As for my life,don't worry I already have friends that I can talk and play with,so my life is completely nice.I don't have time to waste with this game either,because I'm at university and most of the time I write reviews,so I barely have time to play.

PS:Winning a tournament has absolutely NOTHING to do with reviews.Do at least 10 reviews (not nooby ones,reviews with details,images,like mine) and then you can say that you aren't "completely zero".Until then,shut up.

**Subject:** **Posted:** January 31, 2012 11:25 am

you realy think your review are goods?

)) you are just doing reviews about dragons and you are telling just usual stuff for dragons.
And for nolan : with the part with boring fanfic here is what i meant: as a reader when you start reading a card review you re anxious too see some insane combo, and that part from fanfic makes the introduction too long, and the reader starts losing his interest in the review .I think adding a part from a fanfic is a good idea if isnt too long at beginning...or a long one as an end for review

**Subject:** **Posted:** January 31, 2012 11:29 am

tudoran just to show you my writing skills this weekend i will make a review about zero phoenix; and then if you wont like it you can say im a completley zero

shuriken6 · **Subject:** **Posted:** January 31, 2012 11:35 am

quote from vladutz:

You could steal add some more combo using this creature leaving the battle zone effect.And there are some cards wich works for all phoenix like universe gate that you could've spoked of

This right here is Constructive criticsm; what you said before was just plain rude; (Boring fic really got to me) Especially since i worked so hard on that. Like I said though i was tired and i didn't wanna repeat myself, it wasn't because i wanted to get this out of the way. None of my reviews i intend to be like that. And I apologize for flipping out. I really take my card reviews and my fanfictions seriously, reason being is because I REALLY want to become a writer, it's one of my top 3 career choices and i plan on going to school in September this year to study Creative Writing. So when i hear people talk trash about stuff i put a whole lot of effort into i get really offended (Blame my lack of self esteem >.>) But what can I say? I'm human, it was just a once in a blue moon thing, it happens. ^_^

P.S.: two things:

The Both of you need to stop fighting on my Review, take it somewhere else >.>
Read my fanfiction. If it's that boring that people are going to skip over it, then try reading for yourself to see if i can prove other-wise. It won't kill you.
Last thing: Mind changing the votes since its much better than before? I'd appreciate it

(Just read the new comment, still it won't kill you

)

**Subject:** **Posted:** January 31, 2012 11:48 pm

first :your fanfic is interesting(my mistake i didnt read it)
about constructive criticism here are some things you can add to your review to make him better:
Dobolzark, Dark Divine Dragon perfect evo bait and you are sure you have your phoenix in hand;
black ganvet(the psychic creature):it s easy for him to awaken after you suicide your phoenix;
ways to counter it:cards with freezing ability;
and for cyber n world part, you should mention a 1-2 cards that put cyber on top of your deck before destroyng death phoenix

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